[{"id":20696,"date":"2026-09-25T05:30:57","date_gmt":"2026-09-25T12:30:57","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/mastersreview.com\/?p=20696"},"modified":"2026-08-25T12:29:26","modified_gmt":"2026-08-25T19:29:26","slug":"interview-with-the-winner-michael-hughes-wesner","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/mastersreview.com\/interview-with-the-winner-michael-hughes-wesner\/","title":{"rendered":"Interview with the Winner: Michael Hughes Wesner"},"content":{"rendered":"<p><em>Guest Judge Jim Shepard chose Michael Hughes Wesner&#8217;s &#8220;The Big Reboot&#8221; as the third place winner in this 2025-2026 Winter Short Story Award for New Writers. Read the story <a href=\"https:\/\/mastersreview.com\/winter-ssa-3rd-place-the-big-reboot-by-michael-hughes-wesner\/\">here<\/a>, and then check out this interview in which Wesner talks about the relationship between humor and deflection, the human preoccupation with physical appearance, interrogating a character&#8217;s intentions, and more!\u00a0<\/em><\/p>\n<p><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"alignleft size-full wp-image-20698\" src=\"https:\/\/mastersreview.com\/files\/2026\/09\/Michael-Hughes-Wesner_Interview.jpg\" alt=\"\" width=\"768\" height=\"496\" srcset=\"https:\/\/mastersreview.com\/files\/2026\/09\/Michael-Hughes-Wesner_Interview.jpg 768w, https:\/\/mastersreview.com\/files\/2026\/09\/Michael-Hughes-Wesner_Interview-640x413.jpg 640w, https:\/\/mastersreview.com\/files\/2026\/09\/Michael-Hughes-Wesner_Interview-320x207.jpg 320w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 768px) 100vw, 768px\" \/><\/p>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n<p><strong>At one point, the main character says of his wife, \u201cI do as she asks, but my mind fixates on it, the border where real me meets fake me,\u201d which I think gets to the central question the story grapples with: Is our identity made up of how other people see us, or is it only how we see ourselves? Without giving too much of the story away, where do you think the story ultimately lands?<\/strong><\/p>\n<p>I think there are signs, especially toward the story\u2019s conclusion, that contradict this, but my inclination is that the story suggests our identities are generated by self-perception. (For better or worse.) I\u2019m very morbidly fascinated by the mind\u2019s often twisted relationship with the body\u2014particularly in how one\u2019s obsessive preoccupation with their own physical flaws (either real or perceived) can be impenetrable to even the most generous feedback. It doesn\u2019t matter how many people inform our main character of his newfound beauty; his overwhelming discomfort with his artificial appearance prevents him from enjoying his second chance at life, much to the frustration of those around him.<\/p>\n<p><strong>Another question the story asks is: If you could start over, would you? This is a pretty heavy question, and yet the tone of the story is light. Can you talk a little about your use of humor to either enhance or deflect the pathos of the story? Did the voice and tone of the piece come naturally or was it a case of paring back in some places and layering on in other places.<\/strong><\/p>\n<p>Can I first say that I\u2019m relieved to hear that the humor is working? Humor is such a bedrock for my work, but it can sometimes act as a crutch, supporting a lackluster narrative. In this case, the tight, sarcastic voice of the narrator came about very naturally. He simultaneously expresses an almost childlike wonder at this new head while also harboring conspiratorial reservations against the very people responsible for reviving him. That double-barreled tone was extremely fun to write in, constantly ping-ponging between \u201cOoo, how do these new ears work?\u201d and, \u201cMy wife has forsaken me.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>To answer your question, I think the humor is an enhancement via deflection. (Is that a cop-out\u2026?) I\u2019ve spent a lot of time considering what my professor, Kellie Wells, calls the idiosyncratic first-person, wherein a narrator urgently hyperbolizes in an attempt to deflect from meaningful self-reflection. I think the humor in \u201cThe Big Reboot\u201d functions similarly. Either via memory loss or the suppression of trauma, our narrator cannot engage with his interiority. So, he deflects, leaning into sarcasm and paranoia and blame. The story came about quickly once that tone was established. In each ensuing scene, I kept asking myself: \u201cWhat is this guy hiding? What is he misremembering?\u201d<\/p>\n<p><strong>I found myself not trusting the doctor or Jenny (or the pastor, to some extent) because their motivations seemed to be driven by selfishness\u2014the doctor to perform this ground-breaking surgery and Jenny to re-invent a husband into someone \u201cbetter.\u201d Do you see them as a kind of moral foil to the main character, or are their motivations more complicated than that?<\/strong><\/p>\n<p>It\u2019s difficult to say! From the narrator\u2019s tortured perspective, my knee-jerk reaction is the same as yours: to be absolutely distrustful. But maybe there\u2019s an even more interesting, more terrifying story out there from Jenny\u2019s perspective. \u201cWhy won\u2019t my pain-in-the-ass husband stop trying to tear his own head off???\u201d Something like that.<\/p>\n<p>I\u2019m a bit of a naive sap, so I would hope that the characters orbiting our newly-headed protagonist have pure-hearted ambitions and are simply incapable of looking beyond themselves. Jenny wants to save her husband, the doctor wants to perfect this life-saving procedure, and Nate wants to protect his own deeply insecure son. What\u2019s the problem with making the protagonist a little more handsome in the process? Perhaps, in another world, our narrator was a looksmaxxer prior to the accident, and, to his family\u2019s delight, he fully embraces this attractive prosthetic. (\u201cHey, look at my new chiseled jaw and perfect hairline! I\u2019m cured! I\u2019m cured!\u201d) I doubt there\u2019s much of a story there, but still.<\/p>\n<p><strong>What does your writing routine look like? Are you a writer with a dedicated block of time, or are you more in the camp of writing whenever you can?<\/strong><\/p>\n<p>I am a writer with a dedicated block of time who commits frequent and depraved acts of infidelity on said block of time. I write best with absolute quiet and three cups of strong coffee. To write at any other time complicates those prerequisites, so I try desperately to be a morning writer. But the morning is also when the cat needs breakfast and the dog needs to pee and the recycling needs going out and the emails begin to arrive. So sometimes my writing comes sporadically, cannibalizing my afternoons and evenings.<\/p>\n<p><strong>And lastly, what are you working on now?<\/strong><\/p>\n<p>I\u2019m working on two\u2014count \u2018em, two!\u2014books. The first is an absurd tragicomic novel, titled <em>Life Enders<\/em>, which follows a cancer patient whose young life is thrown into mortal disarray after an incompetent oncologist loses the results of his life-saving surgery. With no clue whether his cancer is spreading or cured, he spirals into a self-grieving, existential mess. Similar to \u201cThe Big Reboot,\u201d the tone is suspiciously jovial, and the narrative likewise blossomed from my own paralyzing distrust of medical institutions.<\/p>\n<p>The second is a collection of comedic, speculative stories, much like this one, all of which merge literary realism with some element of sci-fi, magic, and satire. Weird, but not too weird. A Goldilocks level of weird\u2014or so I hope.<\/p>\n<hr \/>\n<p><em><br \/>\nInterviewed by Jen Dupree<\/em><\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>Guest Judge Jim Shepard chose Michael Hughes Wesner&#8217;s &#8220;The Big Reboot&#8221; as the third place winner in this 2025-2026 Winter Short Story Award for New Writers. 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The novel unfolds through dual narratives. One, set in 2000, follows Corinth, a young medical student whose disciplinary case involving a patient\u2019s medical chart threatens the career she has spent her life building. The other flashes back to the 1950s, in which Corinth\u2019s grandmother, Mary Esther, survives an abusive marriage and repeated institutionalizations at a psychiatric hospital. Reid writes in the postscript that the novel grew from a question about how different her own life might have been had she been born in another era, a question reflected in the title and made more intimate by the book\u2019s dedication to her grandmother.<\/p>\n<p>There is much to admire in what Reid has accomplished, but the novel\u2019s structure often undermines the narrative tension and character work it is meant to illuminate. Again and again, Corinth and Mary Esther are forced into symmetry when the more interesting questions arise from the ways their lives do not match.<\/p>\n<p>Corinth learns that Mary Esther was institutionalized at the same hospital where she works during her suspension from medical school. She searches her grandmother\u2019s history hoping to understand what happened to Mary Esther. But the novel\u2019s mystery has been undermined by then because the reader has already spent dozens of pages watching Mary Esther become a wife and mother, suffer abuse, experience psychosis, and enter the psychiatric hospital. Corinth\u2019s investigation asks the reader to wait for her to discover a woman we already know intimately through scene\u2014much more so than a medical chart or family testimony will reveal. More importantly, Mary Esther\u2019s life is so different from Corinth\u2019s that the fear of a shared fate struggles to bear the narrative weight placed on it.<\/p>\n<p>Mary Esther can be angry, reckless, frightened, cruel, and difficult. She threatens her abusive husband with a gun and later loses a stable job after hurling jars at him when he appears with another woman. Her chapters are where Reid\u2019s novel is strongest. Mary Esther does not possess Corinth\u2019s clinical vocabulary: She cannot neatly name depression, abuse, psychosis, or trauma; she must experience them. Trees speak to her. Her paranoia and hallucinations coexist with a gift for numbers, a love of music, desire, and an abiding attachment to her children. After ECT damages her memory, the woman who emerges is quieter and diminished, but never absent.<\/p>\n<p>Corinth suffers profoundly, but Reid rarely allows her to be difficult or seriously wrong. In the medical crisis that leads to her suspension, her failure is mainly one of passivity, while a senior resident commits the clearer ethical transgression. She also neglects both her boyfriend, Adam, and closest friend, Cecily, but a later affair between the two makes Corinth the wronged party before she must fully confront what her withdrawal has cost either relationship. Arjun, the more compatible romantic possibility, then becomes available without Corinth having to make the painful decision to leave one person because she wants another. Perhaps this protection is itself Corinth\u2019s \u201cfortune.\u201d That would be a painful enough truth, but the novel never quite commits to anything so bleak.<\/p>\n<p>The novel repeatedly asks us to imagine that, but for fortune, Mary Esther might have been Corinth; it is less convincing that Corinth might have been Mary Esther. The difference between the women is not simply temporal, but which side of medicine they occupy. Mary Esther is a patient: observed, diagnosed, confined, medicated, and written about. Corinth is training to become a doctor: She observes, interprets, reads charts, and participates in treatment. Even while suffering from mental illness herself, Corinth retains the authority to understand and describe what is happening to her. That difference is related to opportunity, but it cannot be explained by era alone: There were doctors in Mary Esther\u2019s time, just as there are psychiatric patients in Corinth\u2019s.<\/p>\n<p>The contemporary psychiatric ward therefore offers a more unsettling version of the question posed by the title than the one the novel ultimately explores. Mercy, one of Corinth\u2019s patients, has far more in common with Mary Esther: Her illness, treatment, relationships, and freedom are still being negotiated by other people. The contrast becomes even sharper through Dr. Jacinda, Corinth\u2019s attending at Maxwood. Jacinda and Mercy attended the same school, yet one became a physician while the other became a psychiatric patient. Women have not stopped living versions of Mary Esther\u2019s story simply because medicine has changed; fortune still helps determine who gets to become the doctor and who becomes the patient. Yet despite having so much to say about medicine and its institutions, the novel pushes these questions to the background, even though Corinth\u2019s medical identity is far more central to her character than being a granddaughter.<\/p>\n<p>Corinth\u2019s discovery of Mary Esther\u2019s medical chart further exposes the divide. She criticizes the record for reducing her grandmother to diagnoses and treatments, but Mary Esther is still alive, and Corinth rarely treats her as a valid source of her own history. Her age, illness, and years of treatment have made communication difficult, but difficulty is not the same as absence. At one point, Corinth becomes so absorbed in the chart that she neglects the woman beside her long enough for Mary Esther to attempt to light a cigarette on the stove and singe off much of her hair. Corinth searches for the woman her grandmother once was while repeatedly overlooking the woman who is still there.<\/p>\n<p>That distance does not entirely disappear in the novel\u2019s final movement. Corinth returns to caring for Granny, but some of those scenes retain an odd coldness: Even as she dresses and tends to Mary Esther, she continues to understand her largely through what has been lost, describing a life \u201cfractured beyond repair.\u201d The language sits uneasily beside everything Mary Esther\u2019s own chapters have shown us. She has been altered profoundly, but she has not disappeared.<\/p>\n<p><em>But for Fortune<\/em> is absolutely worth reading. Its central symmetry sometimes constrains the richer questions around it, but those possibilities exist because Reid has created a novel ambitious enough to raise them. Its strongest scenes are vivid, painful, and difficult to forget. Reid is an author worth watching.<\/p>\n<p><strong>Publisher:<\/strong> University of Kentucky Press<\/p>\n<p><strong>Publication Date:<\/strong> September 15, 2026<\/p>\n<hr \/>\n<p><em><br \/>\nReviewed by Karina Gonzalez-Espinoza<\/em><\/p>\n<p><em>Karina Gonzalez-Espinoza is a Mexican-American reader and writer based in Tulare County, California. She studied at Harvard University and works in municipal government. 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Its main strength, though, is its narrator\u2019s understated capacity to register\u2014even as he refuses to confront\u2014just how much pain and disconnect lies beneath his relationship to both his family and the world he\u2019s so deftly satirizing, especially when it comes to his wife. I choose to read the ending as only an ersatz happiness\u2014as his having decided to will himself into a state of acceptance that the reader cannot entirely celebrate. \u2014Guest Judge Jim Shepard<\/em><\/p>\n<p><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"alignleft wp-image-20687 size-full\" src=\"https:\/\/mastersreview.com\/files\/2026\/09\/Michael-Hughes-Wesner_WinterSSA_3RD.jpg\" alt=\"\" width=\"768\" height=\"496\" srcset=\"https:\/\/mastersreview.com\/files\/2026\/09\/Michael-Hughes-Wesner_WinterSSA_3RD.jpg 768w, https:\/\/mastersreview.com\/files\/2026\/09\/Michael-Hughes-Wesner_WinterSSA_3RD-640x413.jpg 640w, https:\/\/mastersreview.com\/files\/2026\/09\/Michael-Hughes-Wesner_WinterSSA_3RD-320x207.jpg 320w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 768px) 100vw, 768px\" \/><\/p>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n<p>The first thing I see through this new head of mine is Jenny\u2019s smiling face, red-nosed and tear-crusted, gazing down at me in the hospital bed. As I blink away the <span style=\"font-variant: small-caps;\">loading<\/span> screen and stare at her again for the first time, she screams and cries. Bright figures in the back of the room whoop and dance and high-five. My father abandons his cane to hug my little nephew. Nathan, my brother, shoots his fist and howls.<\/p>\n<p>\u201cCome on!\u201d he shouts, careful not to curse in front of his son. \u201cLet\u2019s eff-word go!\u201d<\/p>\n<p>Jenny hugs me tight enough to pop my new head clean off. But somehow it stays taut atop my shoulders, steady enough to notice, from the corner of my eye, Nate Junior\u2019s gawking. His wide-eyed terror tells me everything I need to know. Everything the hooting and hollering won\u2019t reveal.<\/p>\n<p>That\u2019s my first concern in this new head: how shit I look. My second: who brings a twelve-year-old to something like this? Like, what if I hadn\u2019t woken up? Wouldn\u2019t that, say, traumatize Junior for the rest of existence? 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Something about insurance, an issue with disputed fault after the accident.<\/p>\n<p>\u201cYou\u2019re a medical celebrity.\u201d She winks.<\/p>\n<p>Dad says: \u201cMore like medical anomaly!\u201d<\/p>\n<p>The cameras pan from Doc to me. And I don\u2019t notice Nate Junior hovering until his father screams at him to remove his finger, poking into my freshly sewn neck, wriggling around like he\u2019s mid-booger-check.<\/p>\n<p style=\"text-align: center;\">* * *<\/p>\n<p>The first thing I can\u2019t recall is also the most alarming. My own name.<\/p>\n<p>\u201cThat\u2019s a problem,\u201d Doc says. \u201cUnless, of course, you want to try something new on for size?\u201d<\/p>\n<p>Jenny says: \u201cYou always joked about liking the name Atticus. Remember, hon?\u201d<\/p>\n<p>But of course I don\u2019t. It\u2019s a miracle I remember her.<\/p>\n<p>Nate asks: \u201cHow does that work, exactly?\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cThere\u2019s some ongoing legal debate over whether a new head defines new personhood,\u201d Doc says. \u201cSome think a prosthetic brain implies fresh identity. New driver\u2019s license, new social. In which case, a new name is only fitting.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cWell, I already named him once,\u201d Dad says, \u201cso I\u2019ll sit this one out. Eh, Atticus?\u201d<\/p>\n<p>Jenny laughs and laughs. She squeezes my hand and loses herself in my fisheye lenses. In the end, they choose not to rename me, but they also don\u2019t reveal my old one. Something about the cognition tests, Doc says. He can\u2019t compromise the integrity of his studies. Not with the posterity recordings, his teleconferences, the world of medicine watching his every move.<\/p>\n<p>\u201c<em>Our<\/em> every move,\u201d he\u2019s quick to remind.<\/p>\n<p style=\"text-align: center;\">* * *<\/p>\n<p>Other memories escape me too. Which is odd, since everyone seems to think this new-fangled mind of mine is infallible. But I can\u2019t recall Jenny\u2019s phone number. Or my SSN, for that matter. Or the ending of <em>How I Met Your Mother<\/em>, or the last World Series winner, or even the crash that brought me here.<\/p>\n<p>\u201cThat last one is intentional,\u201d Doc says. \u201cYour wife opted for the trauma suppressant prototype. To make things easier.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cAnd the rest?\u201d she asks.<\/p>\n<p>\u201cRevealed with time.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>We use whiteboards to communicate while the gauze still mutes me. They ask questions and I scribble responses, most often three letters: <em>IDK<\/em>. Then they act all impressed, like I can\u2019t see it in their eyes: the worry that I\u2019ve woken empty-headed. Literally.<\/p>\n<p>Even post-gauze, I\u2019m not allowed to see myself. All phones are confiscated. The bathroom mirror, uninstalled. \u201cWe wouldn\u2019t want you experiencing shock while your body\u2019s still recovering,\u201d Doc says. But as they unravel the bandages, Nate Junior\u2019s glaring suggests I\u2019m uglier than ever before. And a real looker, I was not.<\/p>\n<p>\u201cWell, honey\u2026\u201d Jenny smiles, like it\u2019s the first time she\u2019s seen me. Which, I suppose, it is. \u201cHow\u2019re you feeling?\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cFine.\u201d The word slips out in a hoarse baritone, a new voice that startles me to tears. And then I\u2019m wondering: how do I even produce tears? Does this head contain some tear duct repository? Will it require filling, like windshield wipers? And that sends me spiraling, until soon I\u2019m kicking and punching, rolling in bed, screaming about how I miss my old self, how they should\u2019ve just let me die, blah, blah, blah.<\/p>\n<p>On the bright side, at least I\u2019m starting to get this whole mirror confiscation thing now.<\/p>\n<p style=\"text-align: center;\">* * *<\/p>\n<p>When I\u2019m finally discharged, Nate and Jenny tour me around the house. It concerns me a little that I can\u2019t even recall the layout of my own home. I can picture our marriage bed perfectly. I just don\u2019t know how to get to it.<\/p>\n<p>Nate bakes frozen pizzas, and it takes me three tries to find the pizza slicer. Every drawer I open is the wrong one. Wrong, wrong, wrong.<\/p>\n<p>Home is mirror-proofed as well. Phones, still a no-go. But I accept this as is, because anything is better than the hospital. Those fluorescent lights. The cameras and stares from Nate Junior, like I\u2019m some <em>Twilight Zone <\/em>freak. If there\u2019s one thing I\u2019m grateful for, it\u2019s the fact that Junior\u2019s with Nate\u2019s ex-wife while Nate supports my reintegration, not over here sticking his thumb in my neck.<\/p>\n<p>Then again, maybe Junior\u2019s the only one being genuine. They can shield me all they want, but I know the vague silhouette of me. On my very first night home, I catch a glimpse of my reflection in the oven door and spot thick hair sprouting from my crown. My face feels sleeker, too. Heavier, with a sharper jawline. I can\u2019t shake this alien feeling, as though I\u2019m staying the night\u2014every night\u2014in a swanky hotel room, sleeping in a bed that\u2019s not my own.<\/p>\n<p>When I ask Jenny about it over pizza, the question shocks her. And not just because of the raspy, smoky voice that asks it.<\/p>\n<p>It says, \u201cYou changed me, didn\u2019t you?\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cWell\u2026\u201d Jenny blushes. \u201cI <em>was<\/em> given some cosmetic options.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cAnd thank goodness she did!\u201d Nate punches my shoulder. \u201cOtherwise she\u2019d be stuck with your old ugly mug forever!\u201d<\/p>\n<p>He laughs into his pizza, averting my gaze. Jenny stares at him, like, <em>Oh no, you didn\u2019t<\/em>. And I just stroke my newly chiseled chin\u2014perfectly cropped stubble scraping my thumb.<\/p>\n<p>\u201cThese are all things we talked about,\u201d Jenny says. \u201cThings you wanted over the years.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>Memories flicker like old films, clouding the dinner table. I recall glimpses of a bald spot. Flab rounding my cheeks and throat. Endless mornings, shaving before work, interrogating the mirror for creases or wrinkles.<\/p>\n<p>The likeness fades and I\u2019m back eating pizza. Shifting in my chair, I readjust my straining waistband and sit up straight. Even after the accident, I\u2019ve still got my muffin top. My slouching shoulders, my desk hunch.<\/p>\n<p>\u201cThose weren\u2019t your decisions to make.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cHoney, you couldn\u2019t exactly be consulted! You were dead, remember? <em>Legally<\/em> dead?\u201d<\/p>\n<p>As Jenny\u2019s questions land, an uncanny image bubbles to my vision. Heavy snow on the interstate. Grim grays of a winter\u2019s evening. And a semi-truck sliding forward.<\/p>\n<p>I flinch. The dinner table reappears.<\/p>\n<p>\u201cUh, hello?\u201d Nate knocks on my temple. I can hardly feel him through the thick layers of silicone, or rubber, or whatever. \u201cAnybody in there?\u201d<\/p>\n<p>Jenny hands me another slice, urging me to eat. But not once does she ask how things taste on this foreign tongue.<\/p>\n<p style=\"text-align: center;\">* * *<\/p>\n<p>Jenny and I, to my recollection, have never been church people. But I guess I was out longer than I realized, getting my head screwed on, and now she\u2019s doing good on some emergency room promises. So here I sit bracing pious stares while my wife\u2019s grateful sobbing echoes through the pews, drowning out the sermon about life and second chances. You\u2019d expect angelic choirs, heavenly light streaming down upon me. Instead, a strange ringing like microphone feedback paralyzes me\u2014a side effect of my hyper-attuned ears in this somber chamber. I hardly catch a word of the priest\u2019s lecture about God making us in his own image.<\/p>\n<p>Caressing my stubble, I\u2019m considering whose image I\u2019m made in when Jenny squeezes my hand and points forward. The priest has called me to stand. When I rise, we lock eyes, and I get the impression that he\u2019s dreading this as much as I am.<\/p>\n<p>\u201cAnd please give a warm welcome to our, uh, <em>friend<\/em> here, who, by God\u2019s good grace\u2014\u201d he clears his throat \u201c\u2014has conquered an unconquerable fate.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>I rotate in my spot, offering little waves to the congregation. Paled faces stare back, unsmiling. Struggling to bear witness.<\/p>\n<p>When I\u2019m seated, I lean forward, head in hands, gripping the thick, brittle locks of mane that I\u2019ve been blessed with. But this isn\u2019t my real hair. It\u2019s not even my real scalp. This is a hunk of plastic, stuffed to bursting with computer guts. Dentures and doll hair and marbly fisheyes. Ears that translate scripture and music and my wife\u2019s soothing words into mosquito buzz.<\/p>\n<p>What kind of a second chance is this?<\/p>\n<p>\u201cWow.\u201d The pastor chuckles. \u201cWhat <em>can\u2019t <\/em>our God do?\u201d<\/p>\n<p style=\"text-align: center;\">* * *<\/p>\n<p>Even after the mirrors return, it takes a while to recognize myself. I catch awkward glimpses where I least expect me. I\u2019ll get lost and find the bathroom where I looked for the office, then jump at the shock of my reflection. Or I\u2019ll go down to the foyer when I meant to go upstairs to bed, and I\u2019ll catch my polymer perma-smile grinning from the mirror above the shoe rack. I can\u2019t help thinking I\u2019m a home intruder\u2014some haunted mannequin risen from the Springfield Mall. After finding myself in the porch slider one evening, I threaten to call the cops. It takes Jenny lifting my chin and revealing my throat scar to convince myself: I\u2019m me.<\/p>\n<p>For the rest of the evening, I squat at her vanity, inspecting that little seam, behind which connects the flesh and bone of me to the plastic and circuitry. No wonder Nate Junior\u2019s so fascinated. It runs zipper-like around the trunk of my neck\u2014the long red ribbon of a gift I can\u2019t return.<\/p>\n<p>\u201cStop playing with that,\u201d Jenny says from bed. \u201cYou could hurt yourself.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>I do as she asks, but my mind fixates on it, the border where real me meets fake me. As I climb in beside her, I ask if she\u2019s noticed I can\u2019t stop smiling.<\/p>\n<p>She grins, like it\u2019s our first time sharing a bed. \u201cNeither can I.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cNo, I mean, literally\u2014I can\u2019t stop. Like, the muscles or motors or whatever won\u2019t quit.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>Jenny pinches my cheeks with both hands, massaging the squishy synthetic meat of me until I fear it\u2019ll peel off. When she\u2019s done, I check the mirror, but there they remain: two perfectly rounded dimples.<\/p>\n<p>\u201cYou\u2019ve got a lot to smile about,\u201d she says. \u201cTry to enjoy it, would you?\u201d<\/p>\n<p>With that, I flip over, returning to this pillow sculpted by another head. After some time, my brain triggers the sleep program, and my vision is filled with animated sheep hopping animated fences, grinning their animated grins.<\/p>\n<p style=\"text-align: center;\">* * *<\/p>\n<p>Jenny throws a family get-together in honor of my successful face reveal. She blows up blank balloons and serves cake to family and friends, who compliment me on how good I look now. In the living room, Nate hangs a banner that reads, <em>It\u2019s A Boy!<\/em>, with the last word crossed out and replaced with: <em>New Head! <\/em>(Jenny doesn\u2019t seem particularly pleased with this but helps him hang it all the same.)<\/p>\n<p>Letters pour in from hospitals across the country\u2014surgeons thanking me for my contributions to science. Jenny stands beneath the banner and reads them aloud, but I zone out after the first few. Staring blankly into space for long enough, I\u2019ve learned, triggers the sleep program. I\u2019m literally asleep with my eyes open when Nate shakes me awake.<\/p>\n<p>\u201cAll good in there?\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cSure,\u201d I say, blinking away the sheep. \u201cYourself?\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cBetter than you, I bet.\u201d He pulls up a chair. \u201cBut things with Junior have been tough.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cDivorce stuff?\u201d He nods with proud surprise. I can\u2019t recall my own name but somehow remember in perfect detail the nasty proceedings of his separation. Nate explains how Junior suffers from self-confidence issues. How he\u2019s taken to wearing masks at school. Theater props, Halloween leftovers, anything that hides his face.<\/p>\n<p>\u201cI caught him packing a rubber George Bush into his backpack last week.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>Craning my neck\u2014so far I fear detachment\u2014I spot Junior playing Pin the Head on the Person. Sure enough, the kid\u2019s wearing a Batman mask under the blindfold. He fidgets with it, picking at the fields of acne that litter his cheeks.<\/p>\n<p>\u201cIsn\u2019t he a bit old for that?\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cThe school shrink says it\u2019s a phase. That age is tough to get through, huh?\u201d<\/p>\n<p>Light screaming, as Junior pins the Head on Dad\u2019s back. I sort of imagined face reveal parties as low-key, wine-and-cheese affairs, rather than cake and games. Then again, we\u2019re paving the road with new traditions.<\/p>\n<p>\u201cAnyway, it\u2019s good to talk to you about this stuff. I wish we\u2019d done it more before the, well\u2014\u201d Nate pauses, sips his beer. \u201cAnyway, you get what I\u2019m saying, right?\u201d<\/p>\n<p>Of course I don\u2019t. Not at all. But what else is new? I just smile my great big constant smile, until Nate leaves to chastise Junior for picking at his face.<\/p>\n<p style=\"text-align: center;\">* * *<\/p>\n<p>After some time, my PTO dries up, and I\u2019m forced back to the office. And, with it, my old commute. The scene of the crime, as they say: I-95.<\/p>\n<p>In the end, I keep my license, but provisionally, since my brain has technically never operated a motor vehicle. Nate chaperones me from the passenger seat. Even if it wasn\u2019t a legal thing, I\u2019d like to imagine he\u2019d come along for moral support.<\/p>\n<p>Brown, barren trees race past, and I think about all the other things my brain has never done. Be intimate with Jenny, certainly. Drink into blackout. Cry until my tear ducts run dry. What happens to my perma-smile then?<\/p>\n<p>Nate\u2019s question drags me out of my head.<\/p>\n<p>\u201cHow\u2019s Jenny taking things?\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cGood, I guess.\u201d My hands operate the steering wheel like they\u2019ve done it a thousand times, which, technically, they have. \u201cBetter than me, I think.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>This surprises him for some reason. Before I can ask why, a familiar sight shocks me out of my own thoughts. I recognize it: the scene of my own demise. Recollection hits with movie thickness, replacing my vision with images of windshield shards and engine smoke. I worry for a moment that I\u2019ll crash again.<\/p>\n<p>When it fades, I see a cross standing beside the crash site. There\u2019s a photo, too, of some bald schmuck with pudgy cheeks and dark circles beneath the eyes. How sad to think: the many people who\u2019ve shared my fate. Maybe I\u2019m the lucky one, after all.<\/p>\n<p>\u201cSorry about that,\u201d Nate says. \u201cIt\u2019s from before we knew everything would be okay.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>I find his comment strange until our drive home that evening, when I see the cross again. And I recognize the man in the photo is me. Even if the man in the rearview is not.<\/p>\n<p style=\"text-align: center;\">* * *<\/p>\n<p>Work takes a while to acclimate. But it\u2019s good, overall, to shut my brain off without the sheep. The menial tasks\u2014data entry, spreadsheet formulating\u2014come back without a hitch.<\/p>\n<p>They\u2019ve removed my nameplate, replacing my desktop profile with a generic John Doe display. Nobody refers to me by name, just awkward glances toward my desk. The whole office, complicit in Doc\u2019s experiment. My password, randomized, is written on a Post-it for me to enter. I\u2019m the ideal employee: silent, anonymous. My coworkers feign politeness, trying their darndest to contain the cross-cubicle stares. But I can tell.<\/p>\n<p>It\u2019s strange: reflected in the men\u2019s room, my head actually looks appropriate for once, like it was tailor-made to strut atop this suit. (Even if the suit\u2019s a size or two bigger than my perfect jaw might indicate.) \u201cReady for the runway?\u201d one coworker asks. I look at her strangely, but she just smirks. Only after returning to my desk do I realize that I was grinning back. As always.<\/p>\n<p>For once, I feel like Nate, who always, our whole lives, was confident in his appearance. Nate the Great, they called him. Nate of many prom dates\u2014enough to spare\u2014of wife and son, of settling down. Unlike me, who took years of trial and error to find Jenny. And, even then, never felt completely comfortable in his own skin.<\/p>\n<p>\u201cLook at you with the happy ending, while I just wound up divorced,\u201d Nate recently said, scanning me up and down like an art exhibit he couldn\u2019t comprehend. The same look he gives Junior now, with his masks galore.<\/p>\n<p>Don\u2019t I know what that feels like. If my old head could talk\u2014the stories it would tell.<\/p>\n<p style=\"text-align: center;\">* * *<\/p>\n<p>\u201cHe jumped from a tree at recess, head-first, wearing a rubber horse mask. We\u2019re lucky he only broke his collarbone!\u201d<\/p>\n<p>Nate\u2019s voice shakes over the phone. Faint hospital noises dizzy me with recollection: machines beeping, intercoms buzzing. The fluorescent orchestra I left behind.<\/p>\n<p>\u201cCan you believe that? My son tried to kill himself in a fucking horse head!\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cNate,\u201d Jenny says. \u201cYou don\u2019t know that.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cHis mom thinks it was an accident, but that doesn\u2019t add up. I mean, what if this shit\u2019s genetic? What if everyone in this family wants to\u2014\u201d<\/p>\n<p>Jenny quells the speakerphone, darting outside to finish the call. When she returns, moments later, she sits me down to explain some things. Things she doesn\u2019t want me hearing through the rumor mill. Like, for example, that I wasn\u2019t always the most enthusiastic about this whole \u201clife thing.\u201d Before the dashcam footage was recently recovered, they feared the worst.<\/p>\n<p>\u201cYou thought I did this to myself?\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cYou catch on quicker every day,\u201d she says, though I fear that\u2019s just an insult to the old me.<\/p>\n<p>\u201cWhat did the dashcam show?\u201d<\/p>\n<p>She opens her mouth, then second guesses. Instead, Jenny opens the footage straight from the email to the lawyers.<\/p>\n<p>The incident occurs similar to how I see it in retrospect. My car drives southbound at an average speed, flowing with traffic. The top of the semi-truck\u2014I clock it instantly\u2014floats in the opposite direction. Everything looks normal until it doesn\u2019t. Abruptly, my car slides between lanes, skating right, then left. It drifts out of control, rotates on a dime, pummeling with ease through the thin rubber dividers into the northbound lane.<\/p>\n<p>And here comes the truck. And there goes the horn.<\/p>\n<p>Honk, honk.<\/p>\n<p>\u201cBlack ice,\u201d Jenny says, and I notice she\u2019s fighting tears. \u201cNo fault collision. They just ruled it.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cGreat!\u201d I pat my knees. Nod my head.<\/p>\n<p>\u201cIs there anything you wanted to share?\u201d she asks. \u201cAbout the collision? Or anything?\u201d<\/p>\n<p>It crosses my mind whether she and the surgeons can watch my memories as I can, like rewound tapes. In which case, she\u2019d know exactly what I\u2019m thinking. That maybe the doctor screwed up his trauma suppressant? That I\u2019m not fully certain whether I was at fault, or if I ever knew to begin with?<\/p>\n<p>But I don\u2019t share this with Jenny because\u2014well.<\/p>\n<p>My head, my business.<\/p>\n<p>So, all I say is: \u201cNope. I\u2019m good.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>And she says: \u201cGood. That\u2019s good.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>But just before leaving, she turns back and yanks my hands from the seam of my throat. Which I hadn\u2019t even realized I was toying with, mindlessly, yet again. Under her breath, I hear her say, \u201cI swear to God, you\u2019re gonna kill yourself.\u201d But I\u2019m not sure how to take that.<\/p>\n<p style=\"text-align: center;\">* * *<\/p>\n<p>It hits me after work one night, chopping vegetables while Jenny visits Junior at the hospital: I used to garden.<\/p>\n<p>The knife clangs atop the countertop as I rush outside. Finding it takes a few tries\u2014failing first in the backyard, then the front\u2014but eventually I stumble upon the raised bed in the side yard, between our house and the woods. A familiar rushing sound permeates from the tree line, like blood surging through my head, and I wonder whether these supersonic ears can pick up the very white noise of the universe.<\/p>\n<p>All my plants are dead\u2014dried out and weed-choked\u2014which makes sense, considering Jenny\u2019s not exactly the greenest of thumbs. Yet it\u2019s strange: standing here, when I close my eyes, I don\u2019t see black. I see vivid images of how things used to be. Lush winter cabbage, thick leafy broccoli. An organized, weedless earth.<\/p>\n<p>Before I know it, I\u2019m on my phone, peeking at old photos for the first time since the accident, desperate for verification that yes, in fact, I <em>was<\/em> something of a plant whisperer. Opening my old gardening selfies, I discover something better than blooming produce. It\u2019s that same uncanny face: that pock-marked, double-chinned head from the roadside memorial.<\/p>\n<p>Tired, aging. Me.<\/p>\n<p>I close my eyes, determined to live in that memory. Man and garden, thriving in this season of neglect. But just as I begin to feel relief, the image fades, replaced by the sheep\u2014jumping, and jumping, and jumping\u2014and that pesky sleep program abducts my mind again.<\/p>\n<p>My phone falls to the hard soil as I stand, dreaming in the ruin of what was. And that\u2019s how Jenny finds me, hours later. The upturned selfie, shining through the weeds. Countless sheep, dancing before my lenses.<\/p>\n<p>\u201cThat\u2019s it!\u201d she cries. \u201cWe\u2019re settling this once and for all.\u201d<\/p>\n<p style=\"text-align: center;\">* * *<\/p>\n<p>With Christmas approaching, the surgeons are all booked up. But even then, they\u2019re kind enough to clear their schedules and make room for me: the celebrity-anomaly. With Jenny\u2019s permission, they want to try something called The Big Reboot. Something they say will ease my negative feelings forever.<\/p>\n<p>\u201cHow\u2019s the head?\u201d Doc threads wires around my seat, plugging them into the atlas of my spine, right where the bone ends and the fun begins. \u201cAny complications?\u201d<\/p>\n<p>Jenny responds: \u201cHe still can\u2019t remember his name.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cA strange side effect but not altogether worrying. Could be something to do with the trauma suppression. A forced forgetting of the prior self.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cBut that\u2019s the thing, he remembers the accident perfectly.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>Doc stops what he\u2019s doing and stares at me. \u201cIs this true?\u201d<\/p>\n<p>I see it again: the cars, the dividers, the truck flying toward me. With a jump and a shudder, the memory fades and the hospital reappears. Jenny whispers to Doc in the corner.<\/p>\n<p>\u201cAnd that\u2019s another thing,\u201d I hear her say, \u201che experiences these total blackouts, going unresponsive.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cAnother side effect, albeit an expected one. Your husband no longer experiences memory in the traditional sense. His memories were downloaded, like media files. He watches them in playback. Full-screen, so to speak.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cHe also has these daydreams, like he\u2019s in another world, completely zonked, and\u2014\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cI\u2019m right here, y\u2019know.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>The words arrive from my throat low and confident, startling us both. The whole room glares\u2014Jenny, Doc, the nurses, several students scribbling notes\u2014as though expecting some grand speech. But all I\u2019ve got to say is this:<\/p>\n<p>\u201cY\u2019know, I\u2019ve been here all along.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>Doc steps behind me and flips the switch. Everything goes dark, except that familiar <span style=\"font-variant: small-caps;\">loading<\/span> screen. Then the sheep appear. And that\u2019s how I know The Big Reboot has begun.<\/p>\n<p style=\"text-align: center;\">* * *<\/p>\n<p>The grinning sheep jump and jump and won\u2019t stop jumping and it\u2019s while I count them one two three that I remember my name it\u2019s Ian Ayling I\u2019m thirty-one and I\u2019m the lucky survivor of decapitation the world\u2019s first recipient of a prosthetic head I work in money management in Philadelphia I live in Broomall in the suburbs in a big house between the state park and the golf course and when it\u2019s quiet in the evening from our yard I hear the gentle sound of waterfalls at Ridley Creek near where I live with my wife Jennifer Eriksen-Ayling and I have one brother Nate Ayling and a nephew Junior who cannot seem to keep his hands to himself which is kinda funny because I so remember being the exact same way I remember the self-doubt and the self-consciousness and the curiosity and the exhaustion of not knowing not ever finding out the things that can\u2019t be found out like did I really do this to myself and why did they bring me back like this and was I really worth it because if I was then maybe they\u2019re right I was something worth loving after all and sometimes he feels so close to me the old me closer even than the sheep that jump one two three like I\u2019m walking through the park and the water falling falls louder the rush of water rushing clearer and I can almost reach out and touch him if I can only hurry up and reach the sheep as they jump and jump and jump and jump and\u2014<\/p>\n<p style=\"text-align: center;\">* * *<\/p>\n<p>Jenny insists we go to church on Christmas Eve, although I\u2019m pretty sure we\u2019ve never done that before. Dad hitches a ride with us, as does Nate, and Junior, who\u2019s with his dad for Christmas, mask-free but wearing a sling. So we all embark on yet another new tradition.<\/p>\n<p>\u201cI just want us to feel the warmth and appreciation,\u201d Jenny says in the car. \u201cThere\u2019s so much to appreciate this year.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cSpeaking of warmth,\u201d Dad calls from the backseat, \u201cI\u2019d appreciate if you turned the heat up. I\u2019m freezing my caj\u00f3nes off!\u201d And Junior laughs and laughs, his sling bouncing in-time.<\/p>\n<p>The kid sits beside me in the pew. He can\u2019t help his usual staring, and I can\u2019t help but feel a warm sensation, like gratitude, or its awkward relative. My anger and annoyance are distant memories.<\/p>\n<p>It\u2019s kinda nice, being back here. Being alive again. In this crazy, silly head of mine.<\/p>\n<p>\u201cWanna feel my neck seam?\u201d<\/p>\n<p>Junior lights up. But just as his fingers are floating toward me, his father smacks his hand away.<\/p>\n<p>\u201cNuh uh.\u201d Nate shakes his head at me. \u201cHeck no.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>The pastor takes his spot up front and recites some boring God stuff. As the sermon drags on, I tune out the words and bring on the sheep. It\u2019s easy to ignore the negatives now, like the stares from all around, or the gossip between pews. I could listen in if I wanted to\u2014I\u2019ve got the ears for it. These days, though, I\u2019m choosing peace and quiet.<\/p>\n<p>That strange mosquito buzz returns, though it\u2019s gentler now. Calmer, like white noise. The few words I do catch from the pastor are about love and remembrance, and taking care to remember the ones we\u2019ve lost. Jenny squeezes my hand. Nate wraps his arm around Junior, then pats my knee.<\/p>\n<p>\u201cBy the grace of God,\u201d the pastor says. \u201cWe live such varied lives.\u201d<\/p>\n<p style=\"text-align: center;\">* * *<\/p>\n<p>After services, we visit Ridley Creek Creamery. Jenny, Dad, and Nate complain that it\u2019s too cold, but Junior and I outvote them. My vote counts twice, Junior says, because I\u2019ve had two brains. (And the robot brain gets the tiebreaker, he\u2019s quick to add.)<\/p>\n<p>Junior and I get our cones first and opt to sit outside along the snowbanks, stargazing beneath the trees. I wonder whether the rushing sound I hear is water falling, deep within the woods, or if it\u2019s just that same old buzzing. I\u2019m about to ask Junior whether he hears it too, when some kids pass by, pointing and calling me names, like DollHead and FrankenFucker.<\/p>\n<p>That\u2019s just something I\u2019ve gotten used to. And I\u2019m something they\u2019ll get used to, too.<\/p>\n<p>Our ice creams stay stiffly frozen in the cool night air, and my breath is a warm cloud as I invite Junior to touch my neck seam again, now that his dad\u2019s inside. Of course he accepts. It\u2019s that childlike wonder that I hope to emulate during this: my second chance at second chances.<\/p>\n<p>Junior\u2019s fingers, still dripping with chocolate, run the width of my throat, following the ribbon of flesh and mingled plastic all the way to the hump where my spine ends. I ask him what it feels like.<\/p>\n<p>\u201cLike the sweater Grandpa got me last Christmas, after Mom sewed the neck I tore.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cThat\u2019s basically what happened to me. Give or take a semi-truck.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cDo you think I could get one, one day?\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cAnother sweater? Well, it\u2019s a bit late for Christmas, but I\u2019m sure Grandpa would\u2014\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cNo, no, no! A new head, just like yours!\u201d<\/p>\n<p>The question stuns me for some reason. I wanna tell him that he doesn\u2019t need a prosthetic head, that the one he\u2019s got is perfect as is. But who am I to crush a child\u2019s dream on Christmas?<\/p>\n<p>\u201cHey, wanna see a trick?\u201d<\/p>\n<p>He nods yes, so I guide his hand back to my throat. Then I take a bite of mint chip, making sure I swallow hard enough for him to feel the icy chill slip down the plastic layer of my skin. When Junior screams, I rejoice in his reaction: the horror and excitement and delight all at once.<\/p>\n<p>\u201cEwwww!\u201d he squeals. Then, bouncing on the bench, he asks: \u201cWhat\u2019s it taste like, Uncle Ian?\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cWell, like mint chip, you goofball.\u201d But what I mean, of course, is that things taste sweeter now\u2014fresher, like they never used to. Then I grab him tight, squeezing him until both our heads might roll off, as though letting go would be to surrender him to some distant, faceless memory. And I won\u2019t let that happen again.<\/p>\n<hr \/>\n<p><em><br \/>\n<img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"alignright wp-image-20692\" src=\"https:\/\/mastersreview.com\/files\/2026\/09\/wesner-headshot-scaled.jpg\" alt=\"\" width=\"250\" height=\"326\" srcset=\"https:\/\/mastersreview.com\/files\/2026\/09\/wesner-headshot-scaled.jpg 1963w, https:\/\/mastersreview.com\/files\/2026\/09\/wesner-headshot-640x835.jpg 640w, https:\/\/mastersreview.com\/files\/2026\/09\/wesner-headshot-1280x1669.jpg 1280w, https:\/\/mastersreview.com\/files\/2026\/09\/wesner-headshot-768x1001.jpg 768w, https:\/\/mastersreview.com\/files\/2026\/09\/wesner-headshot-1178x1536.jpg 1178w, https:\/\/mastersreview.com\/files\/2026\/09\/wesner-headshot-1571x2048.jpg 1571w, https:\/\/mastersreview.com\/files\/2026\/09\/wesner-headshot-320x417.jpg 320w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 250px) 100vw, 250px\" \/>Michael Hughes Wesner is a writer from Philadelphia or thereabouts. 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In this essay,<\/em> The Masters Review <em>Assistant Editor <\/em>Jen<em> Dupree discusses one way she&#8217;s found to get words on the page.<\/em><\/p>\n<p><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"alignleft\" src=\"https:\/\/mastersreview.com\/files\/2026\/09\/CraftEssay_Jen-Dupree.jpg\" alt=\"\" width=\"768\" height=\"496\" \/><\/p>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n<p>Writers are often asked about their writing practice and, because my writing practice is pretty boring (couch, no plotting, a million drafts), I often mention that I write all my first drafts longhand. The inevitable astonishment that follows reflects the fact that handwriting has become something of a relic. \u201cDoesn\u2019t that take forever?\u201d people ask. To which I reply that all writing takes forever. \u201cDoesn\u2019t your hand cramp up?\u201d Indeed, it does. \u201cDon\u2019t your thoughts come faster than your hand can move?\u201d I wish. Writing longhand is not efficient, but when I put actual pen to paper, I feel a change in my writing\u2014a release of whatever holds me back.<\/p>\n<p>This change is not entirely in my imagination. There is scientific evidence that handwriting lights up parts of the brain not engaged by typing or even writing with a stylus. <a href=\"https:\/\/pmc.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov\/articles\/PMC11943480\/\">According to an article<\/a> published in 2025 in the scientific journal <em>Life<\/em>, \u201chandwriting engages brain regions responsible for motor planning\u2026as well as areas involved in visual and language processing.\u201d The article goes on to say that the increased brain effort used to manipulate a pen and form letters \u201chas been shown to facilitate deeper engagement with the material and enhance memory retention.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>Often, I write five or ten pages by hand and then, the next day or several days later, I sit on my couch with my laptop and open a Word document. Very rarely do I look at my handwritten pages again. This is in part because I\u2019ve often written so wildly, I can\u2019t read my handwriting. And a lot of what I\u2019ve written is just gibberish\u2014bits of thoughts, sentence fragments, possible character names and descriptions. Because the point of my longhand writing is not to actually come away with a solid paragraph or page of whatever I\u2019m working on. The point is to solve a problem by forcing my mind in a new direction.<\/p>\n<p>My writing happens like this: From somewhere\u2014a dream, a story someone tells me, a conversation I overhear\u2014I get a flicker of an idea. I try to immediately (unless I\u2019m driving) write down a few words that will remind me of the idea. I keep a small notebook nearby to help me catch fleeting ideas. When I get somewhere I can write for at least five minutes uninterrupted, I get out a notebook, open it to a random blank page, and write. Longhand. Until my mind is empty or my hand cramps up.<\/p>\n<p>I started writing longhand after I took a workshop with a woman who taught a version of proprioceptive writing. Proprioceptive writing was developed in the 1970s by Linda Trichter Metcalf, who went on to found the Proprioceptive Writing Center. The practice involves writing for twenty-five minutes with Baroque music in the background. The <a href=\"https:\/\/www.pwriting.org\/about-proprioceptive-writing\">PW website<\/a> states that the \u201cmagic of a PW practice happens because of the insights and feelings we uncover through our writing while we are completely focused on and attentive to our thoughts.\u201d The idea is to focus on the position of the hand, the arm, the shoulder, the way the hand feels as it moves across the page, the way fingers feel gripping the pen. At the same time, the practice encourages examination of thoughts as they emerge. It\u2019s not about editing the ideas, just asking questions of them. If you write, \u201cI hate my mother,\u201d your next sentence might be, \u201cWhy do I hate my mother?\u201d or, \u201cSince when?\u201d In my workshop, the technique was tweaked to focus on story development with prompts designed to draw out the parts of our stories that had the most energy, then spending ten or twenty minutes asking our own questions to ourselves while we explored (on the page) the answers to questions subsequent to whatever sparked us.<\/p>\n<p>The power of handwriting is in its ability to break through wherever I\u2019m stuck. A <a href=\"https:\/\/www.npr.org\/sections\/health-shots\/2024\/05\/11\/1250529661\/handwriting-cursive-typing-schools-learning-brain\">2024 NPR story<\/a> asserts that \u201cgripping a pen nimbly enough to write is a complicated task, as it requires your brain to continuously monitor the pressure that each finger exerts on the pen. Then, your motor system has to delicately modify that pressure to re-create each letter of the words in your head on the page.\u201d In short, handwriting is a complex brain and that complexity engages many parts of the brain and those engaged parts of the brain create more neural pathways that lead to new ideas or new ways of thinking about old ideas.<\/p>\n<p>Longhand writing isn\u2019t something I do just to get started. Throughout my writing process, I return to the page with questions: <em>But <\/em>why<em> does she make that decision? What about him does she even like? Why would he agree to go with them?<\/em> And so on. At that point in my process, I often write the most banal sentences to get myself unstuck: \u201cThis story is about\u2026\u201d or, more often, \u201cI have no idea what I\u2019m doing here and I hope if I keep writing something will come to me.\u201d There are no rules to this writing, no direction, and no stopping. I write until I get some kind of breakthrough and feel sure enough of the story to return to my computer. Or until I realize I don\u2019t have a story after all and I leave the Word document to languish in a file with its peers.<\/p>\n<p>What I really love about writing by hand is that it\u2019s low commitment. I only use lined dollar store notebooks, usually the ones with unicorns on them. I open to random pages when I sit down to write. I\u2019m just playing here. I\u2019m just trying things out. None of this is meant to be good. Bad writing here does not make me a bad writer. Essentially, I\u2019m tricking myself into believing that what I\u2019m writing in these cheap, disorganized notebooks doesn\u2019t matter. And that psychology\u2014that mind trick\u2014allows me to keep going.<\/p>\n<p>The next time you\u2019re stuck, try this: take out a piece of paper, find a pen, and, at the top of the page, write \u201c<em>who wants what<\/em>?\u201d Let your hand lead and your brain follow. Then see what happens!<\/p>\n<hr \/>\n<p><em><br \/>\nby Jen Dupree<\/em><\/p>\n<p><em>Jen Dupree is the award-winning author of two novels, <\/em>The Miraculous Flight of Owen Leach<em> (2022) and <\/em>What Do You Want from Me? <em>(2025). <\/em>Slow Motion: A Memoir of Friendship, Disability, and Advocacy<em>, her first full-length work of nonfiction, was published in 2026. She is an assistant editor for <\/em>The Masters Review<em>, a library director, and a former bookstore owner. She has an MFA in Creative Writing from USM\u2019s Stonecoast program. Her work has appeared in <\/em>Slippery Elm<em>, <\/em>December<em>, <\/em>Solstice<em>, <\/em>The Masters Review<em>,\u00a0and other notable places. 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The mysterious, violent death of her father when she was twelve years old lingers in the dark recesses of her mind, kept at bay. More than two decades later, as the anniversary of his death nears, Lia\u2019s mother and sister are certain she will be overcome by grief, but, as she tells the reader, she\u2019s fine:<\/p>\n<p style=\"padding-left: 40px;\">This time of year was difficult for me as a teenager, losing my dad the way I did at the end of May. It took me a few years not to freak out around the anniversary of his death, but that has long since passed. I have regained the ease of the season. I wish someone would explain this to my mom because she doesn\u2019t believe me.<\/p>\n<p>In the manner of a very fine person, she has instead contacted a former professor and blackmailed him into giving her a job on the Body Farm, an expanse of land that houses a plethora of dead bodies in various positions, locations, and states of decomposition for the sake of research.<\/p>\n<p>When those around her begin dying, the lines between Lia\u2019s fantasies and reality blur. The reader finds themselves lost in time and place: <em>Is really happening and, if so, when and where?<\/em> It\u2019s a choice that risks alienating the reader, but Junered manages instead to pulls them closer still to Lia. The reader experiences Lia\u2019s own uncertainty along with her. Neither she nor the reader know what parts of her mind and story can be trusted. And while the violent fantasies bring on euphoria for Lia and her traumatic past is pushed deep down with seeming ease, the reader will (perhaps metaphorically, or as is the case with a certain book reviewer, perhaps literally) read through partially covered eyes, wincing away from the monsters Lia puts on display.<\/p>\n<p>Lia\u2019s voice in <em>Goodnight Monsters <\/em>is instantly accessible and relatable. Lia speaks like a close friend confiding in the reader. The confessions weave the mundane, the unexpected, and the horrifying in a way that conveys equal importance to each. This narrative voice is juxtaposed with Lia\u2019s deeply unrelatable actions. Starting first with her decision to hide her pregnancy from her husband, best friend, and family, Lia\u2019s choices throughout the novel become increasingly worse. She is a deeply flawed and unreliable narrator, one it would be easy to label as <em>unlikable<\/em> or <em>unrelatable<\/em>. The reader recoils from Lia and her cascade of terrible\u2014deplorable! inexcusable!\u2014choices. But if she is so unlikeable, what compels the reader to keep turning the page? Why should the reader continue to root for Lia even as the consequences of her actions seem increasingly inevitable and deserved?<\/p>\n<p>The answer is deceptively simple: This timely novel comes as the world begins to notice how much is being asked of women\u2019s minds, as medicine begins to admit how women\u2019s pain and hardships, especially in pregnancy and childbirth, have been overlooked. It is no accident that Lia\u2019s fascinations and fantasies coincide with some of the biggest physical changes of a woman\u2019s life: puberty, pregnancy, and postpartum. Junered offers these up as if to say, <em>Look what we endure<\/em>, and asks, <em>What happens when we can\u2019t endure it any longer<\/em>?<\/p>\n<p>As the novel progresses, the reader is not only faced with the question of what Lia is capable of, but of what they themselves are capable of. As Lia peels away her layers to reveal the monsters within her, it is impossible not to wonder if we are capable of the same, if perhaps our own monsters linger somewhere under the surface as well.<\/p>\n<p>Can our monsters ever be truly put to rest?<\/p>\n<p><strong>Publisher: <\/strong>She Writes Press<\/p>\n<p><strong>Publication Date:<\/strong> September 1, 2026<\/p>\n<hr \/>\n<p><em><br \/>\nReviewed by Chelsea Utecht<\/em><\/p>\n<p><em>Chelsea Utecht is a speculative fiction writer. Her work has appeared in <\/em>Bluestem Magazine<em>, <\/em>Shooter Literary Magazine<em>, <\/em>The Gravity of the Thing<em>, <\/em>Thirteen Bridges Review<em>, and more. 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Through the use of second person as well as vivid descriptions of the isolated landscape, the reader is delivered to a monastery in the ancient past. As one brother seeks to obtain Divine recognition through his representational drawings, the other brothers grow old and weary. We are left to ask: Is perfection what will save us? When does dedication become obsession? When is faith the very thing that will be our undoing?<\/em><\/p>\n<p><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"size-full wp-image-20729 alignleft\" src=\"https:\/\/mastersreview.com\/files\/2026\/09\/ClareFielder_WinterSSA_HM.jpg\" alt=\"\" width=\"768\" height=\"496\" srcset=\"https:\/\/mastersreview.com\/files\/2026\/09\/ClareFielder_WinterSSA_HM.jpg 768w, https:\/\/mastersreview.com\/files\/2026\/09\/ClareFielder_WinterSSA_HM-640x413.jpg 640w, https:\/\/mastersreview.com\/files\/2026\/09\/ClareFielder_WinterSSA_HM-320x207.jpg 320w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 768px) 100vw, 768px\" \/><\/p>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n<p>The page gets wider and wider, as additional leaves are affixed to all sides, gummed down with tar. It is larger than your desk, then larger than all the desks pushed together. You work by folding sections strategically. It\u2019s better anyway, not to have the whole thing visible at one time. You\u2019d rather not have all the animals able to look you in the eye at once. They so outnumber you. Eventually the page is larger than the floor; the edges of the paper break against the walls of the scriptorium like waves.<\/p>\n<p style=\"text-align: center;\">* * *<\/p>\n<p>The brothers who came before you had hewn the stone from the cliff and built the monastery atop it. They\u2019d whitewashed the cells and hung the driftwood crosses on the walls. They planted the garden and laid the first fires and looked out of their empty windows at the same sea you look out at. The monastery was already a whole world before you arrived, before you were ever thought of. When you arrived you were a young man with no wherewithal and nobody to feed him. You stepped into the life that was waiting for you like a foot into an old, familiar boot.<\/p>\n<p>Your monastery is small and remote. You live close to the weather. All winter long the wind beats you down until your backs are parallel to the clifftop; in summer there is no shade and the long grass is so full of crickets that they pop and spit out of it like oil jumping around a mackerel in a pan. The cliff path leads down to a small headland, and that is what makes the monastery unique and what makes the pilgrims brave the distance, because the headland is where the first brothers constructed the spiral. The spiral is what it sounds like. A shape made from heavy stones laid upon the grass. Whatever responsibilities the brothers have, they each have the duty and the privilege of walking it daily, inwards and outwards. Each brother does this alone as the waves beat against the rocks beneath them in grays or brilliant blues, depending on the season. When you finish walking back towards the monastery you are always thankful that you have been allowed to make your life here, in this harsh and wild place.<\/p>\n<p>You are walking the spiral when the idea of the catalogue first comes to you. Like a rip current it pulls you under and tosses you about and lands you again on the grass, changed and certain of your reason for being.\u00a0 In the grey twilight, with lungs full of salt, you watch as gulls trace circles around each other in the air above you. You feel your blood pumping a circle around your own body. You walk your widening circle and imagine it spreading to meet the edges of the flat circle of the world. It is winter, and the air is damp and bitter, but the idea you have warms you so that you are able to walk the spiral once, twice, three times until the catalogue is solidified within your mind and you are ready to turn back up the cliff path to where the brothers are waiting.<\/p>\n<p style=\"text-align: center;\">* * *<\/p>\n<p>It begins with a circle on a page. You set out to realize your vision with an ordered mind and a steady hand. In the center of the circle, you draw the sea creatures, then move out to insects, then the larger land animals. The outer edge of the circle is reserved for the birds. You have a list of all the known animals. The brothers work on it with you, relying not only on your own memories but also the precious books in your modest library. You send brothers to monasteries along the coast, in both directions, where the libraries are better stocked. They return after many months, and add their animals to the list. You are moved by their support of your vision. An illuminated catalogue of all the animals, the brothers believe, is a worthy cause. What better way to honor His creation, His boundless imagination and finesse? And so you scour texts, you walk out onto the moors, you hover over rock-pools, you speak to pilgrims from beyond your boundaries.<\/p>\n<p>You compile the list together, and then you set to work alone.<\/p>\n<p style=\"text-align: center;\">* * *<\/p>\n<p>Your project is an excitement to the whole brotherhood, and every brother has a part to play. There are the brothers who keep you in paper, soaking and mashing the rags then stamping them down and nailing them to the monastery roof to dry in the sea air. There are the brothers who carefully tie hairs plucked from the goats and wild ponies into brushes. There are the brothers who pluck the hairs.<\/p>\n<p>Brother Clem grinds down stones and earth and plants into pigments. Brothers Herry and Judd collect eggs from the chickens you have bought, and add the whites to the pigments with precise drops. The scriptorium is a bustling place, and you feel like you are the center point of a great shoal of fish, always moving in the same direction and flashing silver with each mystically communicated, perfectly synchronized turn. It is the happiest time of your life, when the book is a shared, private dream. You dutifully draw your beasts of the field, your crustaceans and your shore birds and with each stroke of the brush you think <em>yes! <\/em>This is my purpose and it is possible.<\/p>\n<p>As you work the brothers chant around you, and the drone of their music is like a heavy blanket that envelops you and keeps you diligently in your chair. When the sun begins to set you sit back from your work, stretch until your neck pops and pick your way down the cliff path to walk the spiral. The waves below you sound like an echo of the brothers\u2019 music.<\/p>\n<p style=\"text-align: center;\">* * *<\/p>\n<p>It doesn\u2019t take long for news of the catalogue to spread beyond the monastery, and the pilgrims start coming to tell you of the animals they\u2019ve seen.\u00a0 They tell you about spots and stripes and that is well and good. You can make peace also with shells, armor, beaks. But then they begin to speak of protuberances none of you have names for. They gesticulate and use strings of clumsy words to describe horns that split and twist, skin like bark. They stop speaking of animals and speak instead of things: glowing things, many legged and many eyed things that move seamlessly between land, water and sky, and it is difficult to conceive of such things. Their words do not translate easily into pictures in your mind. How could you draw what you cannot imagine? When the pilgrims retire, you sit with your knuckles grinding your eye sockets, feeling bleak.<\/p>\n<p>It is Brother Clem who helps you. He takes you out into the garden. He bids you crouch down among the plants and he gently folds back the lowest leaves and shifts the seaweed that is laid upon the soil to reveal the insects beneath. He points out earwigs and cutter ants and worms. He talks of crickets and the transformation of caterpillars.<\/p>\n<p>Think of the grasshopper, he says, with its backward knees. Think of the stick insect. You need not look beyond the beasties to understand the vastness of what is possible. So many bodies assembled so many ways, just here in our own garden. And the world is much wider than our garden. Who is to say what is possible out there? Allow yourself to believe in the animals people bring to you, even if they sound strange and devilish to our narrow ears. Allow Him to be the artist, allow yourself to be the brush.<\/p>\n<p style=\"text-align: center;\">* * *<\/p>\n<p>You walk the spiral until it is too dark to see the stones. You sleep still as a mollusk in your cell and wake up determined once more. Your limbs are possessed with energy, as if the sea wind has entered into them and you are animated by gusts propelling you towards the scriptorium.<\/p>\n<p>You give up on circles. Instead, you decided to organize the animals by number of legs. You\u2019ve learnt from your early mistakes. You leave empty spaces for the animals that will no doubt be discovered and brought to your attention. You do not feel regret that your first attempt was not successful. It is right, to practice, you think. Who but our Creator can achieve perfection without rehearsal?<\/p>\n<p>But the pilgrims continue to come. The second, then the third and the fourth attempts are not so easy to abandon. You are years into the project, and have lost count of the number of drafts you have laid aside when you choose not to start from scratch any longer. You ask Brother Clem to investigate the possibilities of birch sap, so that you might bind papers together, growing the catalogue as and when is needed.<\/p>\n<p style=\"text-align: center;\">* * *<\/p>\n<p>The brothers do what they can to nourish you. They say you must keep up your strength. They know better than to suggest you abandon your task, even when your hand knows no other shape but the grip of a pen, and you must prize it open and massage the joints until you are able to pick up the bowl of broth or cup of milk they are pressing upon you.<\/p>\n<p>They are good brothers, and you wish you had the time to know them better.<\/p>\n<p style=\"text-align: center;\">* * *<\/p>\n<p>Brother Michael sits up with you some nights, when you work late. At first you thought this would be a distraction, but he surprises you. His conversation keeps you alert and you find that some of your best drawings are made when your mind is on his questions and your hand carries on the work unsupervised.<\/p>\n<p>Do you think He struggled through the creation? The way that you struggle? Brother Michael\u2019s voice is careful and quiet, always.<\/p>\n<p>No, you say. I believe He did it joyfully. You can see it in the stranger animals. It must have felt like play to make them up. They are so unexpected, yet lovingly complete.<\/p>\n<p>Like play, muses Brother Michael. Yet it is work for you? Why is that?<\/p>\n<p>It would be wrong, you say. An act of disrespect.<\/p>\n<p>You think so?<\/p>\n<p>You don\u2019t know how to answer. You don\u2019t know how to say that you don\u2019t remember how it feels to play. You must have played as a child but you can\u2019t recall what that looked like. You haven\u2019t seen a child since you were one.<\/p>\n<p style=\"text-align: center;\">* * *<\/p>\n<p>The pilgrims keep coming, and each tells you of some new creature. Is the world so much larger than you thought? You feel as though you are being tested and falling short. Your gut churns with guilt as the brothers work harder to keep up the production of materials you need. They sleep on bare straw now, for the sheets have long since been torn into rags for paper.<\/p>\n<p>Just a little longer, you tell them. A few years more and we\u2019ll be done and He will bless us for this work.<\/p>\n<p>You say this even when you are struggling to imagine that you matter to Him, that He can even have an eye on you when there are so many animals to oversee. Some days you feel as if you are choking when you look at the list and think of how many animals there are to go, or when you worry about how many you still might be ignorant of. When the worry overtakes you, you walk the spiral and breathe deep breaths until breathing is easy once again. You remember your path and you allow your brothers to hold you up. You frequently wake before dawn to set to work, to show them their sacrifices will not go to waste. They do not waver in their industry, and neither shall you.<\/p>\n<p style=\"text-align: center;\">* * *<\/p>\n<p>On the page, all organizational systems have broken down. Birds plunge to the depths of the sea; fish lie amongst the hooves of cattle. The work in the scriptorium takes place in silence now. You didn\u2019t notice the day when the brothers ceased their chanting.<\/p>\n<p style=\"text-align: center;\">* * *<\/p>\n<p>The next obstacle is the color blue. There is too much of it. There is so much more in the sea than seems possible. Of course, living where you do, you knew that it was vast. You have seen how far the horizon is, and in your younger days you had been known to swim beyond your depth in the summer months. But you had not imagined that it could grow deeper still, that there were depths\u2014or so the pilgrims said\u2014that never warmed, not even on the hottest of days. There were depths that the sun never reached, and yet life still thrived there.<\/p>\n<p>You sometimes dream with fear about the depths that go down and down with no end in sight and you look up to see a ladder of fish, their silver bodies stacked on top of each other, showing you how far you\u2019ve fallen.<\/p>\n<p>The color blue is a problem for it needs stones and plants that cannot be foraged or grown in your vicinity. They must be bought, and they are expensive. First you sell a manuscript, then your small collection of gold and silver, then your one and only relic\u2014a knuckle bone from the hand of Saint Just. Brothers must be sent away, further and further afield, to source more lichen and hematite. You cannot grow madder fast enough. There is talk of slowing down, of pausing in your work. You refuse to hear it.<\/p>\n<p>Soups become thinner until they are more water than vegetable. There is rarely meat at table. The brothers become thinner too, in size and in number. You have to scrounge for paper, and when you call for colors you sometimes wait days for your demands to be met. Brother Michael says to be patient, the brothers are doing their best, but when a hole appears in the scriptorium roof and is not immediately fixed you fling a bowl of milk at Brother Herry\u2019s head.<\/p>\n<p>How am I to work like this? you rave. How am I to create anything with the rain coming in?<\/p>\n<p>Brother Herry scurries away, looking at you over his shoulder. You do not see him in the scriptorium again.<\/p>\n<p style=\"text-align: center;\">* * *<\/p>\n<p>It is upsetting, exhausting in fact, to have what you know about the world so frequently upended. Sunlight is not necessary to life; there are creatures that live lifespans within the bellies of others, and are designed to do so; there are instances when you can cut off the head and the beast still lives.<\/p>\n<p>It happens, now, that you look up and do not know the face that is before you. It feels as if, each time you look up from the page, more years have slipped by and new brothers have joined the order, young and strong. You wonder what ideas, what visions these new initiates will have. What will consume them? You wonder how long the brotherhood, that is so much depleted by the book, will be able to sustain itself.<\/p>\n<p style=\"text-align: center;\">* * *<\/p>\n<p>You begin to turn the pilgrims away. You are afraid of them. You don\u2019t want to know how much more you don\u2019t know. There isn\u2019t the space. Your faith wavers. Eventually, the pilgrims stop coming.<\/p>\n<p style=\"text-align: center;\">* * *<\/p>\n<p>You stop eating with the brothers at all. You cease going to morning and evening prayers. You do not help in the garden or the kitchens. You keep your own hours. The only thing that remains of your routine is your evening walk of the spiral, the headland is your only destination. You find yourself walking more slowly down the cliff path. You fear falling, and your body holds a tension it never used to. In the winter, you wrap several blankets around you before venturing out, and still it takes almost an hour by the fire before you have thawed enough to return to work after your circumnavigations. Your body is getting older, and you resent it.<\/p>\n<p>Brother Michael intercepts you on your way back up from the headland. The dark and the wind means he has to put his face close to yours to be seen and understood.<\/p>\n<p>Will you not come back to us? he says.<\/p>\n<p>I am here, I am always here.<\/p>\n<p>But you are not whole. You are shedding too much to carry out this work.<\/p>\n<p>You sigh. You care about Brother Michael, you do, and you would like for him to understand you.<\/p>\n<p>When I first had the vision, you say, I did not think this task would be easy. Neither did I realize it would be so hard. I cannot give into despair, and I try to be strong, but it is difficult. I need focus if I am to finish it.<\/p>\n<p>Haven\u2019t you done enough? You have honored Him.<\/p>\n<p>I have not done what I set out to do.<\/p>\n<p>You should accept that it may never be finished.<\/p>\n<p>You recoil, as if he has struck you.<\/p>\n<p>I cannot accept that.<\/p>\n<p>Why not?<\/p>\n<p>Because I will have failed.<\/p>\n<p>This was supposed to be for God, not for you.<\/p>\n<p>Can\u2019t it be both? you say.<\/p>\n<p>Brother Michael hangs his head and moves to overtake you on the path, headed for the spiral. He squeezes your shoulder as he passes and you take it as a sign of his acknowledgement.<\/p>\n<p style=\"text-align: center;\">* * *<\/p>\n<p>Theoretically, the spiral is designed to give you time for dedicated contemplation and prayer, to bring the brothers closer to God. This is a story. In reality, it is designed to prevent you from murdering each other. When you live closely and tightly the way you do, when you see the same faces day after day, decade after decade, you need a means to forgetting how infuriating everyone is. You walk clockwise and breathe out Brother Clem\u2019s constant narration of the weather, the drag of Brother Judd\u2019s right foot and the sound of Brother Amis biting his nails, a sound that pains you physically when it resounds in the scriptorium. It makes you want to break each of his fingers with a rock; a specific rock which you identify in the garden and on a dark day have to hurl over the cliff to remove temptation. Still, by the time you have walked the circle clockwise and breathed and turned widdershins, even Brother Amis has become bearable.<\/p>\n<p style=\"text-align: center;\">* * *<\/p>\n<p>There are times when you remember yourself as a young man, walking the spiral and feeling like you were walking a prophecy into existence. You brush up against the clear-headedness of your youth and in these moments you commit yourself once again. You promise the air around you that you will work harder, that you will be capable of the miraculous.<\/p>\n<p style=\"text-align: center;\">* * *<\/p>\n<p>Brother Michael keeps your body working. When your eyes are bleary and the animals on the page take up more space in your room and are more solid than the furniture, he prizes the brush out of your hand. He rubs almond oil into your knuckles and the calluses that have formed on the insides of your fingers. He cuts your hair, and his hands on the back of your neck are hot and rough, like bread freshly toasted over a flame.<\/p>\n<p style=\"text-align: center;\">* * *<\/p>\n<p>Since the day you began your life with the brothers, you have walked the spiral every day. There is nothing remarkable about the day that you stop. It is spring, and for the first time this year the breeze that whistles through the scriptorium window is pleasant. The scriptorium is quiet. No one else comes in, now, aside from Brother Michael. You have been drawing a great beast of the sea which a pilgrim once brought you the story of. You have followed their description faithfully\u2014a bulbous head and fins like spades, the doleful eyes of a cow headed to slaughter. You don\u2019t know whether what you have captured on paper is correct, but it will suffice. It is dusk, and normally you would stand up now. You would stretch and step outside. There is no reason why today should be any different, but somehow when you think of walking across the room and opening the door to the world, you are detained by fear. You can hear the rush of the sea, regular as breathing, and it is horrible. The relentlessness of it. The nearness. Was it always so near? It has been the backdrop to your days for as long as you can remember, but it has crept, over the years, from a comfort to a haunting. No, you will not walk the spiral today. You will not go out and look upon the water, or worse, have the water\u2014with the millions of eyes you now know exist within it\u2014look upon you.<\/p>\n<p style=\"text-align: center;\">* * *<\/p>\n<p>Things begin to fall out of your control. You do not have the colors you require. There is no new paper. Your hand cramps as you are forced to retrace parts of the page you have already worked upon, conjuring animals into the tight spaces between other animals. The page has become too large to fold, so you bare your feet and crawl upon it. You work until your back is sore and your knees are bruised and you are close to weeping. You are a fool, and you are lonely and you cannot stop. You are in a trap of your own making. You are a creature in the middle of a page, with box after box painted around it with not a single unclosed line.<\/p>\n<p style=\"text-align: center;\">* * *<\/p>\n<p>Brother Michael puts one hand on your shoulder and with the other holds out a bowl of tea.<\/p>\n<p>Drink, he says. And you do.<\/p>\n<p style=\"text-align: center;\">* * *<\/p>\n<p>Your work will never be finished. Life is not long enough. You try to wring all the minutes you can out of a day. Your hand is articulated by some combination of fear and shame and habit, for the catalogue has been your entire life. It is all you have to show and all you are known for. If you were to stop now, to admit it will never be complete and to allow that to be acceptable, what would that mean for your life? You cannot allow the brothers to know that you are aware of what you have wasted. It is too late now, for you to offer them anything beyond the page. It is all you know how to do.<\/p>\n<p style=\"text-align: center;\">* * *<\/p>\n<p>After missing the spiral once, it becomes impossible for you to return to it. No one has said this, but you feel it. You are no longer one of the brothers. You are an oddity. A burden. You shut yourself in the scriptorium, refuse to venture out even when Brother Michael reassures you that you are still welcome amongst them. Your cell remains empty and you prefer to sleep curled beneath your table, the paper rising and falling with your breath.<\/p>\n<p>Come back to us, Brother Michael says again.<\/p>\n<p>No, you say, there is too much to do. I must work.<\/p>\n<p>You do not say that you are trying to save them the embarrassment of seeing you, and trying to save yourself from their pity.<\/p>\n<p>Are they angry? You ask once, when you are tired and vulnerable.<\/p>\n<p>No one is angry, said Brother Michael. The few that are left are sad. The monastery is not what it was.<\/p>\n<p>He does not blame you, and that is a kindness.<\/p>\n<p style=\"text-align: center;\">* * *<\/p>\n<p>Let me ask you, says Brother Michael, how long has it been since you saw a real animal?<\/p>\n<p style=\"text-align: center;\">* * *<\/p>\n<p>You are aware, dimly, of the brothers leaving you. Brother Clem takes a fall over the cliff and has to be put out of his misery, like a lame horse.<\/p>\n<p>Even the paths are not safe now, says Brother Michael. They\u2019re half overhangs, the cliffs scooped out from beneath our feet. There have been rockslides.<\/p>\n<p>You grunt and think, all the more reason not to venture out of doors.<\/p>\n<p>After Brother Clem, it\u2019s Brother Amis who\u2019s next to go. No accidents befall him, he simply wrapped a hunk of bread and two pieces of kipper into a bundle and walked away. You can\u2019t say you\u2019re sorry.<\/p>\n<p>Perhaps he heard the call, said Brother Michael. Perhaps we should be listening out for it too.<\/p>\n<p>He says something about the walls, but you\u2019re not listening. Other brothers leave too. You don\u2019t know by what means and their names, when Brother Michael utters them, are unfamiliar to you.<\/p>\n<p style=\"text-align: center;\">* * *<\/p>\n<p>Brother Michael\u2019s face is that of an old man, but because of his familiarity you can still see the youth he was within it. His hair is still thick, and white as surf. His face is weathered. When your hand develops a tremor he steadies it, and helps you draw shaky lines across the page. He helps you still, when you no longer deserve it. He still believes in you, perhaps.<\/p>\n<p>Do you still pray? He asks you.<\/p>\n<p>You answer him truthfully.<\/p>\n<p>To honor Him, you say, I have had to cast Him aside. I had to cast everyone aside. The catalogue was so important. It became so impossible that to succeed, to even stand a chance, I had to be alone. There wasn\u2019t space for another, not even Him.<\/p>\n<p>And when you are finished?<\/p>\n<p>I will invite Him back in. He will still be there. He will forgive.<\/p>\n<p>And me? Will I still be here?<\/p>\n<p>It is my dearest hope.<\/p>\n<p>You had wanted to make him proud. You wish you could tell him what you mean.<\/p>\n<p>When you are finished, he\u2019d said. Not if, but when. So you cast aside your doubts and work. When you feel tired, you tell yourself <em>no<\/em>. When you are hungry or thirsty, when the weather comes in from outside and the ground trembles you say <em>not yet<\/em>.<\/p>\n<p style=\"text-align: center;\">* * *<\/p>\n<p>You have brought the world into the scriptorium with you, one animal at a time. You have drawn the world into existence. You wonder if the reason the pilgrims came for so long is that creation continues. You wonder if, once He began, once he saw that it was good, he also found that he could not stop himself.<\/p>\n<p style=\"text-align: center;\">* * *<\/p>\n<p>Brother Michael brings you a meal\u2014you no longer know which meal it is and it doesn\u2019t matter.<\/p>\n<p>Your face, you say. What happened?<\/p>\n<p>I fell, he says, his eyes downcast. I was attempting to repair the roof.<\/p>\n<p>What were you thinking? You admonish. That is a job for the young brothers.<\/p>\n<p>Look around you, says Brother Michael, almost speaking over you. There have been no initiates for many years now. There are no young brothers left.<\/p>\n<p>It is the first time that you can recall that Brother Michal has treated you with something other than gentleness.<\/p>\n<p style=\"text-align: center;\">* * *<\/p>\n<p>Shapes float across your vision and you cannot tell whether they are marks you have made on the paper, or some defection of your body. You do not know whether the marks you are making are still discernible to others. You do not think you could call them drawings any longer. You scratch away with what you have: a burnt stick, stewed leaves and, when your knees begin to bleed, you make use of the blood. You do not consult the list. You rebel. You draw monstrous amalgams of animals and feel sick, light-headed with the joy of it. Who is to say these animals are not out in the world somewhere? Perhaps, you think, these are not lies but divinations.<\/p>\n<p>The wind howls and the rain lashes horizontally, coming straight in through the window and dampening the page. You ignore it.<\/p>\n<p style=\"text-align: center;\">* * *<\/p>\n<p>The animals rise up and drag themselves towards you, bearing teeth and claws and suckers. They are getting closer and you do nothing to push them back. You cannot stop. You will not.<\/p>\n<p>You see Brother Michael\u2019s face in front of you. You see his mouth moving. You hear sounds but not words. He has a hand around your wrist, your drawing hand. He tries to force it away from the page. You will not yield. He points to the window and opens his mouth wide, but you will not fall for tricks. You look away from his face and down at the page. The page is always there. You must attend to it. You see the years of your life written there, in a language you have invented for yourself and illuminated with your own hand. Is it enough? You cannot see whether it is or not.<\/p>\n<p>What you do not see is Brother Michael sitting on a bare floor with his head in his hands. You do not see him look up when he realizes the grinding sound he can hear is not the restless movement of his own jaws, but something external. You do not see him go to the window and stand there until there is no window anymore. You do not see the sea drag him by the ankles. The waves are crashing against the scriptorium door. It\u2019s time to look up now. I\u2019m telling you it\u2019s time. Look up look up or you will lose him! Look up, what are you doing? Look up, the sea is coming for you. Look up, before there is no ground left for you to stand on.<\/p>\n<hr \/>\n<p><em><br \/>\n<img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"alignright wp-image-20730\" src=\"https:\/\/mastersreview.com\/files\/2026\/09\/IMG_8026.jpg\" alt=\"\" width=\"250\" height=\"299\" srcset=\"https:\/\/mastersreview.com\/files\/2026\/09\/IMG_8026.jpg 880w, https:\/\/mastersreview.com\/files\/2026\/09\/IMG_8026-640x766.jpg 640w, https:\/\/mastersreview.com\/files\/2026\/09\/IMG_8026-768x919.jpg 768w, https:\/\/mastersreview.com\/files\/2026\/09\/IMG_8026-320x383.jpg 320w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 250px) 100vw, 250px\" \/>Clare Fielder is a writer and artist based in Sheffield, UK, with an MFA from Columbia University. They were a winner of the CRAFT 2021 Creative Nonfiction Award and longlisted for the 2021\/22 Galley Beggar Press Short Story Prize. Their work has appeared in <\/em>Oyster River Pages<em>\u00a0and\u00a0<\/em>The Rumpus<em>.<\/em><\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>Taking honorable mention in the 2025-2026 Winter Short Story Award for New Writers is &#8220;The Brothers&#8221; by Clare Fielder. Through the use of second person as well as vivid descriptions of the isolated landscape, the reader is delivered to a monastery in the ancient past. As one brother seeks to obtain Divine recognition through his representational drawings, the other brothers grow old and weary. 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Garin"},"content":{"rendered":"<p style=\"text-align: left;\"><em>As we open submissions again for our <a href=\"https:\/\/mastersreview.com\/novel-excerpt-contest\/\">Novel Excerpt Contest<\/a> (our fifth!), we&#8217;re returning to this essay written by B.B. Garin, one of our longtime volunteers. Garin digs into what can make or break a novel excerpt submission, and we hope you find her advice helpful as you consider which section from your novel to submit! This essay was first published in the <a href=\"https:\/\/litmagnews.substack.com\/\">Lit Mag News<\/a> Substack, and later reprinted on our website.<\/em><\/p>\n<p><img decoding=\"async\" class=\"wp-image-16094 alignleft\" src=\"https:\/\/mastersreview.com\/files\/2023\/09\/BB.Garin_NovelExcerpt_1.jpg\" alt=\"\" \/><\/p>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n<p>So, you\u2019ve written a novel. And like a proud parent, you want to send it out into the world. If not the whole thing, maybe just a piece will do. Publishing a novel excerpt can be a great launching point, and numerous lit mags are willing to give novel writers this opportunity. Besides providing exposure to emerging writers, having an excerpt published is often a wonderfully validating experience.<\/p>\n<p>My very first publication was a novel excerpt. I was thrilled, a stranger thought this thing that I\u2019d been pouring my life\u2019s blood into for years was worth reading! It gave me the confidence I needed to take the plunge into querying agents.<\/p>\n<p>Now, we\u2019re reading for our Novel Excerpt Contest here at <em>The Masters Review<\/em>, and I hope to see some fantastic writers receive the same boost I did. Yet when it comes to preparing an excerpt, it seems many writers struggle with this elusive process.<\/p>\n<p>Most lit mags publishing excerpts will specify \u201cstandalone\u201d or \u201cself-contained\u201d in their guidelines. The two are basically interchangeable and appear self-explanatory. A reader must be able to understand the piece without any outside information. On the surface, straightforward. But what they\u2019re not spelling out is that the piece must be its own <em>story<\/em>. That\u2019s where things get dicey.<\/p>\n<p>Nothing breaks my heart more than reading a piece with lively characters, vivid descriptions, and stellar pacing only to reject it because it\u2019s not a standalone excerpt. This often happens because of a misconception that the first chapter or chapters will make the best excerpt. Now, there are a few magazines which specifically seek first chapters, which is why it\u2019s always important to READ THE GUIDELINES. Otherwise though, first chapters generally make for poor excerpt material.<\/p>\n<p>I understand why writers fall into this trap. We want a piece that doesn\u2019t need outside context. The first chapter is the context. Writers fear anything from later in the novel won\u2019t be understood. All perfectly logical. Except, the purpose of a first chapter in a novel is at odds with the purpose of a standalone excerpt.<\/p>\n<p>The first chapter is designed to draw the reader into the story and make them want to keep reading. That feeling you get at the end of a really good first chapter, when you\u2019re going to ignore that sleep you really need because you\u2019ve just got to read the first page of chapter two, is not the feeling you want at the end of reading a novel excerpt in a literary magazine. For a very simple reason. There is no chapter two. It\u2019s incredibly frustrating to be left wanting to know what happens next, when there is no next. This doesn\u2019t mean your excerpt has to tie everything up in a neat bow. Plenty of stories have unresolved endings, but the questions left unanswered must feel like a purposeful part of the ending.<\/p>\n<p>Of course, not all first chapters are created equal. Yours may very well be the exception to the rule. What is important to consider, not just with the first chapter but with an excerpt from any point in the novel, is does it end on a cliffhanger? If the answer is yes, this is probably not your best option. An excerpt that ends at the moment the body is found, the employee is fired, or the overworked paralegal has coffee spilled on her by an incredibly attractive stranger generally doesn\u2019t leave the reader with a sense of conclusion. Such excerpts may come from novels I\u2019d love to read, but again, selling your manuscript isn\u2019t the object here.<\/p>\n<p>So, what are we looking for? What\u2019s the magic formula that will lead to publishing glory? I wish I knew. If you ever find it, pass it on.<\/p>\n<p>In the meantime, there are a few things worth considering. The first is change. Like any effective story, a novel excerpt needs an element of change in order for it to feel like it possesses a complete arc. Preferably, this will be a change with more emotional significance than say, getting a haircut. Unless the haircut is symbolic of your character breaking free from her stifling upbringing. In which case, send your haircut excerpt. That\u2019s a scene that contains its own story.<\/p>\n<p>This theoretical novel may be predominantly about the life of a beauty pageant hairstylist. The haircut scene may be just the jumping off point for the novel\u2019s main action. But for the purposes of an excerpt, we don\u2019t need to know where this change takes her, we just need to see it taking place. Note that this may be a scene with little action. A woman walks into a salon, sits in the chair, talks to a stylist, looks in the mirror, and leaves. There doesn\u2019t have to be a lot of movement for there to be momentum. The journey here is an internal one. And that\u2019s fine, so long as the reader can clearly see her moving from one phase of her life into the next over the course of the piece.<\/p>\n<p>In searching your novel for this standalone structure, look for places where a character is faced with a decision. This almost always provides some type of change. Even if the character ultimately decides not to change their actions, if they\u2019re moving forward after becoming aware of new consequences, then the stakes have changed. This sort of doubling down on a position can also provide a feeling of conflict which, when followed by the resolution to continue forward, becomes a self-contained narrative.<\/p>\n<p>A lot of the successful excerpts I see seem to take place somewhere after the inciting incident but before the climax. This makes sense. This is what\u2019s often referred to as the rising action, and it\u2019s the place where our protagonists encounter more and more obstacles. Naturally, these complications lead to change. Complications also lead to bursts of conflict, which is another crucial element for any self-contained story. Clear conflict is what will drive your excerpt forward.<\/p>\n<p>Often, I see excerpts that are full of dazzlingly dialogue or clever antics. These scenes may be amusing to read, but nine times out of ten nothing is really happening. By which I mean nothing is challenging the characters. There\u2019s a lack of meaningful conflict. It\u2019s a balancing act to be sure. Remember our haircut scene? Nothing physically is really happening, but a lot is going on internally. Contrast that with a car race scene. A lot may happen physically, but if nothing is changing internally, I might as well be watching NASCAR. The outcome of the race may be monumental in the context of the novel, but unless these stakes are effectively conveyed in the opening of the excerpt, it won\u2019t feel like a significant conflict is present.<\/p>\n<p>This is why climaxes generally don\u2019t make for good excerpts. Yes, there\u2019s a lot happening. And yes, this is a moment of big change. But there\u2019s also been 300 pages spent establishing who these people are and why we should care about this change. It\u2019s hard to find a few paragraphs this late in the novel that will do the same. It\u2019s not impossible, but you\u2019ve set yourself a much harder task than if you\u2019d selected a smaller moment of change from earlier in the manuscript.<\/p>\n<p>A final factor to consider when excerpting is consistency. I find this mainly applies to novels that use multiple points of view. This can be a great way of telling a large story, I use it myself quite often. However, in an excerpt I strongly recommend against switching POVs. It almost always leaves the reader with a sense of unfinished business at the end. Finding sections in both voices that combine to tell a standalone story is difficult. The result is often a sense of reading two separate stories, neither of which has time to fully develop.<\/p>\n<p>Instead, if your novel alternates between Jane and John\u2019s perspective it is often better to excerpt two of Jane\u2019s sections without the intervening John one. This saves the reader from being jolted out of the story when the voice changes, and keeps them from wondering what happens to John if the narrative never returns to his voice. Herein lies what I think might be the biggest secret of novel excerpting: an excerpt doesn\u2019t need to come verbatim from your novel manuscript. No one is going to call you up and ask to see the original for a word-by-word comparison, I promise. Editors understand that the piece is coming from a larger story. That there are inevitably things which won\u2019t make sense out of context. This may mean cutting a single line. It may mean cutting an entire scene. The important thing is for the piece to feel continuous.<\/p>\n<p>When you first sat down to write, you had to decide what story you wanted to tell. When you excerpt, you\u2019re faced with the same decision. All the tips and tricks in the world won\u2019t matter until you make that choice. And it\u2019s a choice only you can make because, in the end, no one knows your novel better than you.<\/p>\n<hr \/>\n<p><em><br \/>\nby B.B. Garin<\/em><\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>As we open submissions again for our Novel Excerpt Contest (our fifth!), we&#8217;re returning to this essay written by B.B. Garin, one of our longtime volunteers. 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In her newest work, <em>D\u00e8y<\/em>, Magnolia, a Haitian American real estate agent in Miami, is mid-errand for her daughter\u2019s tenth birthday when a gunman opens fire in a mall. She survives the shooting, but cannot bring herself to acknowledge what happened, even to herself. Instead, she absorbs the event in silence, continuing forward with the routines of her life. Across a narrative shaped by shelter-in-place directives\u2014\u201cRun,\u201d \u201cHide,\u201d \u201cF(l)ight,\u201d and finally \u201cD\u00e8y,\u201d the Haitian Creole word for mourning\u2014what develops is not only a portrait of one woman\u2019s muted reckoning, but also a broader meditation on how violence becomes absorbed into the rhythms of the ordinary. With <em>D\u00e8y<\/em>, Danticat ultimately presents the sobering argument that trauma is iterative and quietly endured, revealing how deeply the normalization of violence has become an accepted condition of human life.<\/p>\n<p>A haunting aspect of Magnolia\u2019s journey is the periodic glimpses she catches of the shooting victims\u2019 lives through the news. While these moments honor those who were killed, Danticat also exposes America\u2019s tendency to package grief as a consumable product. A new ritual of mourning emerges alongside public vigils as Magnolia watches survivors and family members respond to unseen journalists on primetime television. Soon, she encounters a news panel discussing the shooting she escaped: \u201calong with the hundreds that have come before it: in homes, office buildings, street corners, buses, subways, trains, malls, supermarkets, schools, college campuses, churches, synagogues, mosques, movies theatres, nightclubs, post offices, amusement parks, military bases, hospitals, city halls, community centers, outdoor concerts, indoor concerts, demonstrations, parades. Says a man in a pale suit jacket and bow tie, \u2018That\u2019s just America.\u2019\u201d<\/p>\n<p>Here, Danticat highlights how mass tragedy is hollowed into a repetitive spectacle before the country inevitably moves on. Throughout the novel, she layers Magnolia\u2019s story alongside references to historical and international violence, widening the narrative\u2019s scope beyond the single shooting. This becomes especially evident when Magnolia learns more about the deteriorating conditions in Haiti and the armed militia San Manman (\u201cWithout a Mother\u201d), which terrorizes citizens on behalf of corrupt politicians. Danticat writes, \u201cThe chaos is how the rich and powerful make obscene amounts of money and hold on to unchecked power.\u201d Whether expressed through political corruption, social media outrage, or artificial offers of \u201cthoughts and prayers,\u201d violence is repeatedly met with reactions that fail to confront its underlying causes. Yet Danticat\u2019s greatest achievement is not simply her critique of these systems, but her attention to the individuals forced to exist within them.<\/p>\n<p>Since the mall shooting, Magnolia reacts to every siren sounding in the distance, and she wonders whose life has just been altered. Her fixation on the victims and their families becomes a way of approaching trauma indirectly, allowing her to grieve for others while avoiding the reality of her own survival. Danticat captures this emotional suppression with remarkable subtlety, showing how trauma often manifests not through dramatic breakdowns, but through habits of avoidance and denial. Even Magnolia\u2019s silence becomes its own form of survival, a sincere attempt to preserve the fragile routines of a family against the societal chaos threatening to overwhelm them.<\/p>\n<p>The consequences of that fear become most visible in Magnolia\u2019s identity as a mother. Danticat grounds her protagonist through a vibrant tapestry of family and friends, particularly her ten-year-old daughter Zo\u00eb and Harrison, Zo\u00eb\u2019s father. A significant part of Magnolia\u2019s anxiety stems from a parent\u2019s inability to fully protect a child. She reflects that \u201cFear might be the only common parental language.\u201d As Zo\u00eb navigates competing influences and adolescent independence, Magnolia sometimes feels unjustly estranged. Her love for her daughter is immense, \u201cmore than the sea had water,\u201d yet Zo\u00eb is growing up in a world shaped by active-shooter drills, social media, and random violence. Danticat captures this parental vigilance during Zo\u00eb\u2019s volleyball game, when Magnolia arrives and immediately \u201ccalculate[s] the distance from the bleachers to the exit and how long it would take to grab Zo\u00eb.\u201d Motherhood becomes the lens through which Magnolia\u2019s fear is most fully expressed, asserting that violence extends beyond the immediate victim and settles into future generations. Despite the exhaustive anxiety that accompanies being a parent, Zo\u00eb is not a paranoid or broken child. Instead, she emerges as one of the healthiest and most confident characters in the novel, evidence to the strength of the familial bonds surrounding her. In presenting Zo\u00eb as resilient rather than defeated, Danticat explores how survival is not the absence of fear, but the ability to continue <em>living<\/em> alongside it.<\/p>\n<p>Remarkably, Magnolia, often called \u201cMa,\u201d embodies the tension of living within a constant state of in-betweenness. She is both mother and daughter, Haitian and American, separated from Harrison yet still lovingly tethered to him, caught between her roots and the forces of gentrification reshaping the communities around her. Even the violence defining the novel occurs in multiple places at once, unfolding before her in Miami while echoes of instability persist across the sea in Haiti. Danticat repeatedly places Magnolia between competing worlds and responsibilities; in doing so, she illustrates how identity is often shaped by divided loyalties and emotional tension. This is especially reflected in Magnolia\u2019s profession as a realtor, a job concerned with poignant crossroads. As a result, one of the novel\u2019s most resonant questions soon becomes the meaning of <em>home<\/em>. Throughout <em>D\u00e8y<\/em>, home emerges as something fluid: a place from the past, the future, or within others. For many of Danticat\u2019s characters, home is not simply where one lives, but where one discovers belonging amid uncertainty. In a world marked by displacement, violence, and change, the search for home becomes a courageous act of preservation.<\/p>\n<p>Ultimately, <em>D\u00e8y<\/em> is a novel about the delicate resilience required to continue living amid encroaching chaos. Across her extraordinary body of work, Danticat has consistently illuminated the lives of those navigating grief and movement, transforming historical and political realities into deeply intimate human stories that offer connection. An immigrant artist deeply attuned to memorializing personal and collective suffering, Danticat continues her legacy in <em>D\u00e8y<\/em>, a novel that feels especially urgent in the current state of cultural division and discontent. As Danticat writes, \u201csurviving isn\u2019t the end of the story. It\u2019s where a different one begins.\u201d That sentiment becomes the novel\u2019s guiding truth. Survival does not erase trauma, nor does it resolve the contradictions shaping our lives. Instead, it creates the possibility of moving forward, carrying fear, love, memory, and hope together toward a new sense of <em>home<\/em>.<\/p>\n<p><strong>Publisher: <\/strong>Knopf<\/p>\n<p><strong>Publication Date: <\/strong>August 25, 2026<\/p>\n<hr \/>\n<p><em><br \/>\nReviewed by Mark Massaro<\/em><\/p>\n<p><em>Mark Massaro earned a master\u2019s degree in English Language &amp; Literature from Florida Gulf Coast University. He is currently a Professor of English at a state college in Florida. His writing has been published in <\/em>DASH<em>, <\/em>Litro<em>, <\/em>Newsweek<em>, <\/em>The Georgia Review<em>, <\/em>The Hill<em>, <\/em>Los Angeles Review of Books<em>, <\/em>Rain Taxi Review<em>, <\/em>The Sunlight Press<em>, and others.<\/em><\/p>\n<p><script src=\"https:\/\/bookshop.org\/widgets.js\" data-type=\"list\" data-list-slug=\"books-reviewed-by-the-masters-review\"><\/script><\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>In an era shaped by tragedy and exhaustion, Edwidge Danticat remains one of the few writers capable of illuminating the silent psychological aftermath that violence leaves behind. In her newest work, D\u00e8y, Magnolia, a Haitian American real estate agent in Miami, is mid-errand for her daughter\u2019s tenth birthday when a gunman opens fire in a mall. She survives the shooting, but cannot bring herself to acknowledge what happened, even to herself. 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